Like "Carolina Parakeet", I think you spent more time on the stupid name than the logic of the talent points you're using. You should give it a name that describes the playstyle. I suggest "Death by 1000 Cuts" because that's the only way you will kill someone focusing on Retractable Blade and Ion Cylinder for damage.
You say this is for PvP yet you take Rebraced Armor over Steely Resolve and Neural Overload...
You have Iron Fist and Flame Shield but no Flame Surge...
The damage will be nowhere near Pyro or even AP and unless you are wearing PvP tank armor (which means your damage is terrible anyway), most of the survivability talents are wasted.