trueKieran Posted October 28, 2015 Share Posted October 28, 2015 (edited) I cringed at the "don't touch me" scene to. Not only is the dialogue bad the entire scene is a disaster. First he force pushes you back like your a rag doll and you manage to move him an an back 2 feet. They made your Sith/Jedi seem like a fairy in comparison to him, which annoyed me. The scene should of had him running at me and I throw him back the same way he force pushed me and him having to get back on his feet and being like: That was a mistake, now you will suffer Or something to that effect Welcome to the one-size-fits-all Outlander story mishmash... Edited October 28, 2015 by trueKieran Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DOHboy Posted October 28, 2015 Share Posted October 28, 2015 so OP did you have problems with bounty hunter waiving hand saying "you are an idiot (paraphrase) " or pretty much 90% of the smuggler responses? there are plenty of comedy/light hearted moments in the original stories. These are just more obvious and pronounced. You can look up many many threads on "favorite quotes" and find plenty that would fit similar styles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmenQ Posted October 28, 2015 Share Posted October 28, 2015 Loved all of these. I especially enjoyed Can I have your stuff? since it is so ubiquitous on the forums. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zharik Posted October 28, 2015 Share Posted October 28, 2015 I didn't hear a single poop joke, so no, far more mature than preschool level and George Lucas. Fixed that for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alec_Fortescue Posted October 28, 2015 Share Posted October 28, 2015 (edited) Just asking as the dialogue is extremely pre-school level and in most parts cringe worthy. Show me on a dolll.. I wouldn't say preschool, more like elementary school. Pegi 12. Edited October 28, 2015 by Alec_Fortescue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjSnazzyduds Posted October 28, 2015 Share Posted October 28, 2015 (edited) God forbid they add a little comic relief. Why so serious OP? Edited October 28, 2015 by DjSnazzyduds Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_Iurus Posted October 28, 2015 Share Posted October 28, 2015 Every one of these lines made me cringe. It's hard to take this story seriously when the writers didn't. So the complaint is that they speak like adult human Earthlings? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jumajin Posted October 28, 2015 Share Posted October 28, 2015 (edited) It appears that I like "pre school" dialogue. /shrug I'll have to agree with you. I thought Chapters 1-9 were spot-on with all the Star Wars dialogue style and franchise tropes. Every one of these lines made me cringe. It's hard to take this story seriously when the writers didn't. Riiiighttt. Because, you know, the Star Wars films never had tongue-in-cheek humor. Edited October 28, 2015 by Jumajin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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