Knightless Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 (edited) You will find many,You're time will come, padawan... Of truth, we cling to... May the force, be with you<...> Edited May 6, 2012 by Knightless Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jakobpoop Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalkingDinosaur Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 No thanks, I'm not interested in purchasing a Bible please don't call this number again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sambeta Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 Your grammar hurts me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkgryphon Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 You don't need suspension points "..." at the end of a line. A line break already has a pause. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToEasy Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 What? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velaran Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 But.... I'm a Sith. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apatah Posted May 7, 2012 Share Posted May 7, 2012 For those of you that truely missed it and didn't understand. The OP used a haiku. Expand your minds ya culture-lazy bastiches Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkgryphon Posted May 8, 2012 Share Posted May 8, 2012 For those of you that truely missed it and didn't understand. The OP used a haiku. Expand your minds ya culture-lazy bastiches He also did a terrible job. Like I commented about the suspension points, as well as his haiku not really relating to nature. I know haiku can be about anything, but I'm traditional and prefer those about nature. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalterien Posted May 9, 2012 Share Posted May 9, 2012 For those of you that truely missed it and didn't understand. The OP used a haiku. Expand your minds ya culture-lazy bastiches Bleh.. you beat me to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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