LazerDan Posted October 19, 2016 Share Posted October 19, 2016 Kira Carsen waited nervously on the defender class cruiser, staring hopelessly into the wild space that had just taken its grasp on her Master. "T7!"she called. "Any luck with contacting Master Shan?" "Contact=negative" the droid replied sadly. Lord Scourge appeared behind Kira and placed his hand sympathetically on her shoulder. "Can you sense it?" He asked "The Sith Emporer has returned. And more power than ever before." "Ever since we left Doc to heal Rusk on Orion I have't been able to sense a thing." "Of course not. You Jedi allow yourself to feel compassion. It is the obstruction on your path to greater power. The weight that slows you down." Kira frowned and muttered something under her breath. Scourge nevertheless continued, "I think we should try to stop the threat. Or at least delay it." Kira hastily shook her head. "No. my Master was explicit. We have to warn the Republic of the threat and besides, think how it turned out for Marr" (Please continue) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
admiralrcpg Posted December 6, 2016 Share Posted December 6, 2016 I find your lack of grammar disturbing I find your writing to be very confusing. Also "Emporer". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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