Silenceo Posted August 1, 2014 Author Share Posted August 1, 2014 (edited) I have a question are we the prisoners or do they crash land with us and the prisoner thing was the idea I had for the opening and thank you I thought I spent more tbh The numbers you gave was way over 150. However, that was due to doing the numbers and costs for abilities wrong. Though, Shatterpoint basic lvl 1 is 3 points, not 1. I made many changes to what you had in there to keep them true to the levels you wanted. Some you were paying too much, others too little. Side Note: We are the prisoners. Who ever said it was a crash landing this time? The premise is to be stranded, doesn't always have to be a crash. Edited August 1, 2014 by Silenceo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mathemagica Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 (edited) Ok, let's try. Character Name: B4-DM-πR (sometimes read as ,Before the Empire‘) Profession: Starship mechanic Species: Astromech droid Skills/Tools: Movement: A magnetizable frame at the bottom of his chassis, allowing it to get a solid hold on metallic surfaces. Jet (for short, burst-like use only) Perception: thermal vision and vision in a very large spectrum of light rays audio receptors Tools: terminal pluggin oil spray welding equipment basic repair tools machine saw grappling hook integrated communicator (medium range relative to usual ground communication) two gripe arms Biography: Constructed by Kuat Drive Yards. 15 years of service on republic vessels. 4 years of service on several vessels of various alignment. 2 years of service under the mechanic that brought it aboard the <insert name of the ship we‘re gonna crash in>. (bad job, B4!) During its time in the republic and later aboard starships of various criminal syndicates and smugglers, B4 has had many memory wipes. His last master, an experienced mechanic that was working with droids a lot, kept up the memory wipes, however the mechanic did not erase the memories of any repairs or mechanical work B4 had performed. This allowed B4 to gather experience in mechanical tasks beyond what astromech droids usually had. It turned the droid into a experienced and capable mechanic, but - due to the constant erase of every other memory - not much more. Special abilities: Isolation against electric shocks and extreme temperatures Regularly updating astrocharts Has no restraining bolt attached (his last mechanic liked him) Enhanced creativity protocols Language processing programs (covers various languages of Republic and Hutt space. Does not cover languages of ancient Sith culture or the unknown regions - e.g. the Chiss' language) Items: 1. reserve powercell 2. spare parts 3. reserve fuel for jets, welding equipment etc All items are stored in two compartments in B4's chassis. Planet vote: Dxun (why is Belsavis not an option?) Edit: I might have to change my biography, if we're the prisoners. Edited August 2, 2014 by Mathemagica Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jarons Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 The numbers you gave was way over 150. However, that was due to doing the numbers and costs for abilities wrong. Though, Shatterpoint basic lvl 1 is 3 points, not 1. I made many changes to what you had in there to keep them true to the levels you wanted. Some you were paying too much, others too little. Side Note: We are the prisoners. Who ever said it was a crash landing this time? The premise is to be stranded, doesn't always have to be a crash. Thank like I said I wasn't home and my laptop to use so I couldn't really jump back and forth to make sure sorry thought they was right thank you for fixing it for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Selenial Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 Oh it will be different, forgot to change the breaking up part, going to change that now to be more clear. Think more like the Narrator will be a physical being. It will change what he is depending on which planet is chosen. Wait what? Do I get to be your apprentice or something? Sidekick Sel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silenceo Posted August 1, 2014 Author Share Posted August 1, 2014 (edited) Wait what? Do I get to be your apprentice or something? Sidekick Sel It depends on the planet that is chosen. Not too late to enter you know... Darth Jahuro could use an apprentice though... The Narrator Character will be crazy powerful, so a forewarning to those who might want to try and kill him... Side Note: Do remember Narrator and to a lesser degee, Assistant Narrator's, can create and direct NPC's to fit the story. So it is a possibility Sel. Edited August 1, 2014 by Silenceo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karadron Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 It depends on the planet that is chosen. Not too late to enter you know... Darth Jahuro could use an apprentice though... The Narrator Character will be crazy powerful, so a forewarning to those who might want to try and kill him... Side Note: Do remember Narrator and to a lesser degee, Assistant Narrator's, can create and direct NPC's to fit the story. So it is a possibility Sel. Can I be a Junior Assistant Narrator? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nalathemaster Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 Hmm, so so far we have The Astromech droid The Mandalorian The mad sith The sith assassin The Jedi And the Wookie This is a REALLY cool lineup Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silenceo Posted August 1, 2014 Author Share Posted August 1, 2014 Can I be a Junior Assistant Narrator? There is the Narrator and the Narrator Assistants... No more... No less... Besides, to become a Narrator Assistants it must be either offered, or you apply via PM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silenceo Posted August 1, 2014 Author Share Posted August 1, 2014 Hmm, so so far we have The Astromech droid The Mandalorian The mad sith The sith assassin The Jedi And the Wookie This is a REALLY cool lineup I think these titles might fit better: The Droid Mechanic The Mandalorian Soldier The Terror of the Night The Sith Assassin The Jedi Watchman The Wookie Engineer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nalathemaster Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 (edited) By the way, since we are prisoners ( maybe the pub side could be jailing the imps and stuff happens?) can we go to belsavis ? Edited August 1, 2014 by Nalathemaster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silenceo Posted August 1, 2014 Author Share Posted August 1, 2014 By the way, since we are prisoners ( maybe the pub side could be jailing the imps and stuff happens?) can we go to belsavis ? No. Check the transport again for further clarification. Not to mention it is during the Cold War. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nalathemaster Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 No. Check the transport again for further clarification. Not to mention it is during the Cold War. Gage transports are imp ships, so I'm guessing the imperial characters are jailing us republic tree huggers? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silenceo Posted August 1, 2014 Author Share Posted August 1, 2014 Gage transports are imp ships, so I'm guessing the imperial characters are jailing us republic tree huggers? Traitors, rebels, enemies, insane sith lords the lot of us! There is a good reason for all of them aboard this transport. If there is not, I shall make one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nalathemaster Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 Traitors, rebels, enemies, insane sith lords the lot of us! There is a good reason for all of them aboard this transport. If there is not, I shall make one! Last I checked, Jarons is loyal to the empire Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silenceo Posted August 1, 2014 Author Share Posted August 1, 2014 Last I checked, Jarons is loyal to the empire Political fallout. Ta-da! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jarons Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 The numbers you gave was way over 150. However, that was due to doing the numbers and costs for abilities wrong. Though, Shatterpoint basic lvl 1 is 3 points, not 1. I made many changes to what you had in there to keep them true to the levels you wanted. Some you were paying too much, others too little. Side Note: We are the prisoners. Who ever said it was a crash landing this time? The premise is to be stranded, doesn't always have to be a crash. Ok I think I fixed it and added some stuff and traded Shatterpoint for conceal others and put the other 6 points to use thank you for fixing it for me again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nalathemaster Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 Political fallout. Ta-da! What about the Wookie? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silenceo Posted August 1, 2014 Author Share Posted August 1, 2014 Ok I think I fixed it and added some stuff and traded Shatterpoint for conceal others and put the other 6 points to use thank you for fixing it for me again Mind putting it in a new post all enclosed in a spoiler tag? Or send it to me via PM? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jarons Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 (edited) Last I checked, Jarons is loyal to the empire Yes I am but remember am hunting people so they can be on the transport and I found out so I went after them and yea ill pm it to you Edited August 1, 2014 by Jarons Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mathemagica Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 I added two programs to my Beeping Mechanic: 'Enhanced creativity protocols' and 'Language processing programs'. The creativity protocols are meant to allow for a more flexible interpretation of its programming (more flexible than a rolling and beeping computer). The language programs are, so that it can actually understand what anybody is saying. Is that ok? Also: Should I change the last 2 years of its biography, since it's a prisoner, not a mechanic on the ship? As a prisoner, B4 would also have a restraining bolt, right? I vote for Beeping Mechanic as my title. Or Beep-a-mech Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Selenial Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 (edited) It depends on the planet that is chosen. Not too late to enter you know... Darth Jahuro could use an apprentice though... The Narrator Character will be crazy powerful, so a forewarning to those who might want to try and kill him... Side Note: Do remember Narrator and to a lesser degee, Assistant Narrator's, can create and direct NPC's to fit the story. So it is a possibility Sel. Hmmm. I have an Idea, I'll PM you in a bit, once I'm out of here Side note: Italian weddings are amazing Edited August 1, 2014 by Selenial Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Selenial Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 There is the Narrator and the Narrator Assistants... No more... No less... Besides, to become a Narrator Assistants it must be either offered, or you apply via PM. I feel special Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nalathemaster Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 So,if this is Tor Taris, couldn't we just get to the pub or imp garrison and get a shuttle off planet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jarons Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 Wait so you get two characters or is your chracter the big bad we will be facing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jarons Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 So,if this is Tor Taris, couldn't we just get to the pub or imp garrison and get a shuttle off planet? Why did you tell him that man it was everyone reason for picking TARIS and it be the funniest planet to play on and the hardest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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