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Note: This site/blog will be used as development tool for my Star Wars the Old Republic (SWTOR) legacy family on the Ebon Hawk server. This is a fan fiction journal, characters involved are either controlled by myself or are people I’ve met or interacted with in the mmorpg. If you have any questions, comments or feedback please feel free to post.

Every family member who has an entry are characters in the game, hopefully one will be someone you are interested in meeting. I’m not an rp ‘elitist’ who demands perfection while roleplaying, so don’t worry. Just drop me a line or send me an in-game communication and let’s have fun in the Star Wars universe.

 

Each entry will be very brief, so they are easy to follow and allow further backstory/development for my characters. Thanks everyone and feel free to post here or on the blog. Take care and enjoy SWTOR!

 

http://swtorfiction.com/

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:)

 

Stopped by to check out your story and journal entries and also to say welcome to the fan fic forums.

 

 

I guess the foremost question is why is him name 'Gramps'? This usually denotes a man of some age unless this is just a nick name that has stuck with him, or it means something different in a non English language. Anyway, good beginning, some choice for Gramps to make, his wife or his son, he got himself into quite a mess and someone else paid the price.

 

I must admit that the journal entries were a bit confusing, at first, until I read the first two chapters of the story, now they seem to fall into place.

 

 

Anyway, keep up the good work.

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The name Gramps is more of a nickname than his formal birth name. He is of advanced age and, appearance wise, he looks like your stereotypical grandfather.

 

I completely understand the journal entries feedback. I want to use the journal entries as more of a "Pulp Fiction" type narrative. Where they jump from player to player, from different timeframes, each providing feedback and their thoughts on the grander story. I have been role-paying for almost two decades now, so I want to try something a bit different. Hopefully it doesn't get lost in translation.

 

Thank you so much for the feedback and thoughts, it really means a lot to me. Seems like a wonderful community and I'm glad to be included.

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http://www.swtorfiction.com

 

Updated story: Relationship Goals

Chapter posted: Chapter 4: "I Forgive People By Forgetting Them."

 

I also posted a new journal entry, however it revolves around an IC experience last night unassociated with the story of Gramps past. So if you decide the check it out, please keep that in mind.

 

Thanks all.

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The website's face (index page) has been updated. Since 4 chapters have been posted and a few more journal entries in the past couple days, I thought is would be a good time to make the home page a bit more focused on the characters stories.

 

Thanks all.

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