Deviss Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 (edited) https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B0qwN4mQFQx_dTQweHhONXRvZ2M/edit?pli=1 Hope you enjoy. Your constructive criticism is very much welcome, please tell me what you think about it! Edited July 16, 2012 by Deviss Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
almostinsane Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 This was very interesting to read. Still, there were many grammar errors and somehow, I felt unhappy that Revan was forced to battle the Emperor for all of eternity. However, I loved the interactions between the characters and the reference to Knights of the Old Republic II. Thanks for writing this. God bless! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deviss Posted July 18, 2012 Author Share Posted July 18, 2012 (edited) Would be nice if you could point out some of them via PM mate. Anyway, thanks for your kind words and for reading in the first place. Edited July 18, 2012 by Deviss Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deviss Posted July 23, 2012 Author Share Posted July 23, 2012 Done some more editing, I am looking forward to some more comments and criticism - it really helps me out. Thanks again everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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