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Oh wow....what a start!
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Loved it from beginning until end. But I felt that there was no closure with Theron, is that what spy vs. spy is about? He thinks Trix is dead and Trix thinks he has moved on. They haven't really came to terms yet.
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I guess Trix doesn't know the definition of insanity
6 months, did Theron abandon his kid? Doesn't seem like him at all.
Cant wait to see the next one
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Love your story.
But a lot the Republic characters turned into cartoony villains a little to quickly for my liking just for the sake of having Trix be on the "good side". Like the whole pendulum shifted as soon as she switched sides, the Empire all of a sudden caring about civilian casualties and being the victims while the Republic is out to murder babies.
It's your story though, and you've done a great job with it. It just stood out to me because I always viewed Jace being way more pragmatic then murdering his own grandson over a woman he hasn't been with in over 30 years.
Can't wait for the next chapter
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Btw. I don't hold it against Liatrix that she fell in love with two men.
The irony is that Scourge has no one but himself to blame for that. Pretty much treated her like crap after she gave up everything to be with him before she met Theron (seeing a pattern here). The only triggering event to wanting her back was seeing her with Theron, kinda selfish imo. But i wouldn't put it passed a possessive creeper like Scourge
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Scourge is being creepily possessive right now, and a big baby. Can't see how he can still be jealous when Trix gave up everything to be with him. His insecurities are definitely showing.
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You missed the perfect opportunity for a LAAAAANA reference XD
I bet so much money the SIS is using Jonas friendship with Theron to get to Trix.
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Can't log in either. So this is happening only to people with Time Warner as their ISP?
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The Vietnam War and the Zulu War aren't really good comparisons...The North Vietnamese got their *** kicked most of the time by US Forces and the British were laughably outnumbered by the Zulu's and still managed to win in the end.
Spy Vs. Spy
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