Nicely written! Nice characterization and description, and a pretty seamless transition between thought and speech, which is often hard to do. Given that I'm an English major, I have to offer at least one spelling correction (there are a few, but this one rankles): "You wreak of the Light..." You are trying to, and should, use the word "reek," as in to emit a foul odor. Looking forward to reading more!

This is a major issue. Akaavi is currently borked. Her class/attributes are confusing. She's essentially a trooper who uses a double-bladed non-lightsaber, which you can't find any high-level replacements for. WHY is Aim a primary attribute? Her weapon is not ranged! What is up with this?

So many whiners. Launch date is the 20th. If you get to play on the 19th, consider yourself lucky. Seriously, you guys are pathetic. Stop whining.