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  1. Alright, I’m going to wade into the AU waters here. The jumping off point for this is a What If from Short Fic, and the premise is that NotLP: Friends & Allies Featuring IA Kinka Spoilers: References Act II agent stuff
  2. Lesaberisa, I love Malcineve in all her “I’m really bad and evil, I swear!” glory. It’s nice that Vette’s getting to her. And really, who can resist cute baby animals? And the tauntaun pieces were funny. They way Amitia’s leads right into Arys’ is great. Striges, Your story reminds me of many an ill-fated trip to the fair to win one of those tiny goldfish that never lives more than a few days after you bring it home. You can just imagine Adoko’s horrified face looking at the squidling. Also, “polyplast prison.” I like this phrase a lot. Bright, How awful for Ruth. It makes sense that Baras would choose to wound her that way, since we’ve already seen him use that strategy once before. And I will always love Quinn and Ruth together, especially these nice moments between the two of them. Lady-Jean, I like that Maldecka has Zarro in her life, someone who’s like a surrogate parent providing those important lessons. And that last line about Zarro brushing away the horrors of the mission was great. Alaurin, Ooooh, I really want to know what Jorgan’s afraid of. This is gonna be good Also, Thank ya! I figured that would be the only way Rissia would know for certain that she was safe with him. And in her sith mind, she sees nothing wrong with this solution. It’s a pretty selfish thing to do, but she’s determined not to be alone. One of these days I’ve got to start fleshing out her backstory a bit more.
  3. Comments: (Eek! I got behind so quickly, so I'll start with the prompt change and work from there for now.) Lady-Jean, Welcome! I like that we’re seeing the Jedi training through the eyes of a child. Maldecka’s age would definitely make the experience more difficult, especially mastering certain fears and being separated from her family. Yoshi, I liked the nice little payback from the nerf. It does pay to do the right thing. Kabeone, I loved the parallel with Scourge, and it totally makes sense that some of the, ahem, less patient companions would start getting annoyed with all those side trips our characters make. (I’m looking right at you, Kaliyo ) Magdalane, Awww, what a sweet story. Loved it! Alaurin, This sounds exactly like me with spiders Mallay's reaction is totally justified. Story: Mea Culpa With Rissia and Quinn. Takes place immediately after Defenses. Spoilers for SW Act III and IA Act II. About 1,000 words A quick (spoilery) note:
  4. Indeed I was looking for a good legacy name, and that sounds like the kind of overly dramatic name a sith might come up with, haha!
  5. Comments: NotLP: Ceremony, with Kinka and Vector No spoilers. Just over 1000 words As far as timelines go, this is the latest entry for Kinka, happening a year or so after Anniversary.
  6. Comments! Defenses for SW Rissia, about 1,000 words. Spoilers for IA class story (Acts I & II) Some violence ahead. Nothing too graphic, but it bears a mention. Note:
  7. That blue for the Chiss is beautiful! I'm finally getting a chance to catch up with this thread, and I have to say, I love every bit of your work - so good!
  8. Ooooh, I love the connection to NSP!
  9. Replies! Anniversary for Kinka. Takes place a year after the Sisterhood series. Brief mention of Act II agent thing. I swear I will stop writing angsty things for poor Kinka eventually And so as not to end on a completely sad note, here's a short First Impressions with Talos and Vector. Takes place a couple weeks after Sisterhood when Talos joins the crew.
  10. Incoming wall ‘o comments! Now for the last part of Sisterhood for Kinka, part 4 I believe. Spoiler from the IA's late Act III. Links to Part1, Part 2 & Part 3. A big thanks to all of you guys that have enjoyed it so far Note:
  11. I got all prolific and finished up Sisterhood pt. 3 for Kinka. (Links to Part 1 & Part 2.) Brief mention of spoilery Act II things for the agent story.
  12. Kabe, that is so adorable!! <3 Adwynyth, Torturing Quinn needs no excuse *cues evil laughter* Lesaberisa, Somehow you managed to make that kid frightening and adorable in his Sith hero worship. Nicely done. Also, I vote terribly glorious...and now I really wanna make that happen. Alaurin, I would have liked this for the title alone, haha! That must be horrifying for Mallay to get caught in that outburst. Bright, Oh I feel so badly for Vette, but it’s nice for her to get to bond with Ananz and his crew in the second one. Sisterhood, pt. 2 for Kinka Part 1 is here
  13. Bright, I can imagine poor, logic-minded T7 short circuiting if he ever tried too hard to unravel the mystery that is Quinn. Also, General Pasty Imperial might be my new favorite Quinn nickname now
  14. I did not expect that's how the reunion would turn out! Enjoying muchly
  15. Incoming wall of comments! NotLP: Sisterhood, pt. 1 With Kinka, Vekkz, Kaliyo and a Talos cameo. No spoilers, about 1850 words. Hopefully its not too tedious!
  16. Comments Replies! Now for a couple short stories. The first is Parenthood with Rissia and Quinn. The second is an Alternative Perspective for Quinn. Both take place post-Quinncident late in Act III, so beware SW spoilers. Parenthood: Alternative Perspective
  17. Wow, so much to read today! I hope I don’t miss anybody. Story! Cross My Heart with Kinka and Keeper. Agent spoilers ahead. Takes place between Act I & II Note (spoilers here, too):
  18. Malicineve is all kinds of dark, and you conveyed that really well. I would not want to cross paths with her! Also, Game of Sith Now for a couple stories from Kinka’s world. The first one is a Loneliness & Solitude that takes place shortly before the agent arrives on Taris. Spoilers for Act I & II. About 1,000 words. NotLP: What If This is an alt universe version of the above story. Same night, much different outcome. About 1,100 words. Warning: Spoilers for IA’s Act II. Also, violence.
  19. Tatile, Yay for awkward innuendo and cuddles! I love Broan & Rochester. Prompt: NotLP - My First With agent Kinka, Kaliyo and Temple. Super vague spoiler in the first graph. Note: Takes place a few weeks after Act II wraps up, before Kinka and Vector have any romantic involvement.
  20. Alaurin, Welcome! I know how it is to be shy about sharing; it took me weeks to finally work up the guts to do it. You should definitely keep writing! I really enjoyed your story, and I can relate to the whole undershirt thing. I’m still bummed that poor Vector is bundled up from head to toe underneath it all! *Eh, not that I’ve been looking or anything... *Sniffles* This was really well done — the sense of loneliness and sadness and then the little bit of hope at the end. I look forward to hearing more of Veresia’s story.
  21. That is just awesome — so many good stories to read! And seriously, this nerd loves some charts! Comments: Bright, I love the fact that Nalenne is a comic book geek. There’s just something about a powerful Sith lord geeking out over comics that makes me smile. Tatile, It’s probably for the best that Rochester gave up before he got to step 12 of that recipe. Drizzling molten hot sugar all over everything — terrifying. Yoshi, The thought of little kids running around with their play lightsabers and robes is too cute. And it’s nice that Jasin got a taste of some well-earned hero worship. Selentar, “Sith code of colour conduct,” haha, I like this. And I can relate to Xania — the color is important, especially if you’re going to plunk down a hunk of credits for the thing. *cough, may or may not have bought a car solely based on color, cough* Kabe, *giggles* That was perfect
  22. One word, so many giggles Icerose, Xenobiology lessons are fun. I always enjoy reading about species I don’t know a whole lot about, and it makes sense that K'saren would have to explain her abilities/limitations to the crew. Lesaberisa, I’d imagine it would be quite the spectacle to see Jedi taking public transit, and I like the thought of these big, powerful Jedi having to do something so normal as take the bus (so to speak). Magdalane, Your Corso is just the sweetest thing ever. And how scary the accident must have been for both of them. Now for a couple fairly short stories for SW Rissia. NotLP: Confessions With Rissia and Vette. No spoilers. Takes place mid-Act I Transportation With Rissia and Quinn. No spoilers. Takes place on Alderaan in Act I.
  23. Thank you! The agent has a lot of demons in her past, and Vector’s such a calming influence for her. I hate to think how she’d react if something happened to him. (Though that might make a good What If? some time.) The poor girl needed something nice in her life. She does have some darkness there, which I will totally get to writing...eventually. Yoshi, That’s gotta hurt, Dankin getting busted for speeding, considering all the other nefarious things smugglers get involved in. And it’s no surprise Corso would be in heaven in a place like that. Bright, Love the banter between Wynston and Watcher Two. I get the impression he’d be able to wear her down eventually if he really wanted to. Irishfino, I loved this! It was nice to see Rylee’s evolving impression of Geltie, from skepticism to infatuation to this point where she’s got faith in him that comes from genuine affection rather than because she’s part of his cult. The whole thing was just so lovely and romantic.
  24. Comments: Bright, Darn that Quinn...doesn’t he know he’s not supposed to be taller than Nalenne? But seriously, I’m a fan of anything that has Quinn unable to do anything right. Irishfino, I’m liking these stories with Geltie and Rylee. She gets to be an actual fleshed out character as opposed to merely a Sith groupie, which was the in-game impression I had of her. Also, strip chess, niiiice. Adwynyth, Eeee! Girl time with the agent crew <3 And you captured their personalities so well. Magdalane, Ha! Ordering the good stuff in her sister’s name, very sneaky Tatile, Poor Amilia, the Sith do wear a lot of black. At least it’s slimming? Striges, Awww, Risha trying to make Kirya feel better about the hat. It’s such a bummer to look forward to something you wanted as a kid and then realize it’s not quite what you expected. Story time! NotLP: Good/Bad Memories With agent Kinka and Vector, spoilers ahead! Also, this is kinda long. About 1600 words. Note:
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