I am LOVING this story. Reading about Aly and Jaesa makes me want to break my healing streak and reroll a Warrior! Ha. Couldn't agree more. That's one of the reasons I'm appreciating Aly's character (and dialogue) so much. I find that those conversation options only fit my characters' personalities when I give up on imagining something more complex. (for example, my lovely and laughably greedy bounty hunter. She reminds me of Mr. Krabs from Spongebob. "MONEY MONEY MONEY ar ar ar") It's nice to see a little more thought put into LS choices than, "Oh all right, maybe I shouldn't kill this particular dude. Aren't I wonderful?" Pats for Patrick! And with that last chapter, whoo. Aly loses her cool. I'm really starting to see the application of the Nietzsche quote back in Chapter 9. Jaesa's role as Aly's "moral compass" seems like it's going to prove to be plenty interesting in coming chapters. Hahaha YESSS! Epic squee! The notes are great. Provides a lot of background and I have to look back through the chapters after seeing all the references I missed! Basically, this thread is total awesomesauce, keep going. Got my popcorn all ready for the next chapter. Any of that Dr. Pepper left?