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  1. Even though Lelu and Theron tried to keep things quiet on Yavin, rumors still spread, and Satele ended up giving him an ultimatum. Pretty much "end it or I'm going to your boss and your father", obviously not in those words. He kind of flipped her the bird and walked away...not really, but for the most part.

     

    At that stage in the game, Lelu wasn't sure how to feel about Satele, other than it being remarkably ironic as to who his parents were. She had no parents. She doesn't even know how old she is. The closest thing she has is Marr, who found her wandering the streets of DK after she accidentally killed her master and ran away (it was how she discovered she was force sensitive). He kept her for two years, teaching her what she needed to survive, and then brought her to Korriban at the age of 20. She doesn't really understand parental units at all.

     

    Besides, the whole time they were together on Yavin, she knew deep down it had an expiration date, so she figured Satele's ultimatum was unfounded anyways. Theron, on the other hand...

     

    I don't remember any Lelu in my game or Theron flipping the bird. I should have frapsed I guess. :rolleyes:

  2. So for the people that like it this way, that have decorated our strongholds around it, you're saying just...suck it up let it break how we decorated? As if nobody but you matters in your universe? I don't want my decorations in my stronghold breaking or disappearing back to inventory because somebody randomly decided on the forums that my decoration where I put it doesn't belong there.

     

    Who pissed in your cornflakes? No need to be such a jerk about it.

     

     

    I don't give a crap about decorating, but I'm going to +1 the OP's and Luna's suggestion. Sounds fine to me.

  3. Hey Luna :rak_01: I can't say it enough you have an impeccable ability with the characters. Everybody sounds like they should. Your Scourge is perfect. Very few writers do him justice. Really really good chapter but then they all are LoL. You've got me really curius about what will happen in the future with so much going on. Kudos on how you keep it all straight in your head. Hurry up write more!!! :rak_03:
  4. That's fine. :) Of course feelings about various characters are subjective. And, truth be told, I don't think it should be impossible for any character to die. I just don't think it should be automatic. In good storytelling, we should never be sure exactly what will happen. We have to believe the writer is willing to do anything that the story needs.

     

    It sounds like you haven't read Lunafox's stories. She knows what good story telling is, cause she does it all the time. She should be writing for the game. I have said it before and its worth saying again. Her fics get me through the dryspells in this game and she has an uncanny ability to write the canon characters.

     

    I agree the stories should keep us guessing, but that's the problem with the game lately. It's predictable. People were calling it months before the end. There were no surprises.

  5. This a good post, but it's merely an appetizer for the great post to come. No, not mine.

     

    OP: I'm pleased to remind you of this post. I know it offended you, and you ended up pretty much ignoring all of it to reiterate arguments that it had demolished. And now here I am reposting it for your edification. Oh well.

     

    As for the "SJWs are ruining muh game" folks, hold on to your butts.

     

    Nice troll attempt guy, but the OP is right, I agree with them and most of the posters here totally. There needs to be a kill option on Ashara. BW needs to fix this asap. :rak_01:

  6. The writer's already left Bioware, months ago.

    Minus the ranting words, I agree. The equal thing was a bit too on the nose. They just let her do the Sith Code thing of breaking her master's chains without giving her a challenge over it, instead making the Master look like a dolt.

     

    Good riddance then.

     

    Yeah some ranting there sorry, but like I said I just got it done and it angered me and left me feeling like a chump. Good job BW, way to make your subs feel great in a game they pay for. What was the point of building up the INQ as this powerful Sith if they can't even take out their lamest apprentice? They could have had a fight and INQ puts her in her place, but I would rather have killed her. Never liked her anyway. :rak_04:

  7. I just finished playing the return and what a complete piece of garbage. Ashara my INQ's equal? Don't make me laugh. Fire the idiot who wrote this trash. There has to be a kill option. Like most people on the thread said, Ashara is a flakey twirp. She didn't fight all the bads. Ashara is delusional. A real true Sith wouldn't hesitate to kill her. :rak_01:
  8. Hey Luna :rak_01: Mindblowing chapter. Man, Liatrix sure showed them and like the other commenters said the part with Doc and that droid was hilarious.

     

    I can't believe my man One is gone. Didn't see that coming. Keep it up Luna. Got a lot questions can't wait until the next post.

  9. Coge is the strong and silent type lol. He's been around a couple of times that I remember. ^^ Waves!

     

    My dear Major, it would seem that it's official you have a partner in crime, and the rest of us are assured plenty of adventures. Which reminds me, has anyone seen Gertrude...and *snaps fingers* Benjamin, the other lightsaber, Orangenee uses to enforce with? Maybe Sarova took them out for sharpening or...recharging or what ever it is you do to lightsabers. :p

     

    S'up :rak_01: Maybe strong in smell but silent is true.

     

    Whoo! Scared another lurker out of hiding! :jawa_evil:

     

    ... I mean, ah, thank you. Eh heheheheheh...

     

    Theron: ...does this mean I get to stay?

    Quinn: NO--

    It's looking pretty likely. I believe we're in a majority vote of "stay" vs. "go." :D

    Quinn: *fuming*

    Theron: I LOVE YOU GUYS

    Quinn: Now I'm the one being betrayed.

    Theron: I thought that was standard behaviour around here?

    Quinn: ...you insulted yourself with that one, you know.

    Theron: [grumble] Touche.

     

    Lurker is true too. I lurk there fore I am. :rak_03:

  10. You really put a lot of thought into everything and it shows. Its a lot richer than what we get in game. I guess it's like comparing a book to a movie, the book is always better.

     

    You got a real way with words, every bit is great. Hurry up and write more :rak_01:

  11. Ok well here goes.

    While I never really enjoyed the escape segment in-game, especially at the beginning, I felt you rushed through it just a little too fast. It broke my immersion and made me feel like the whole thing was really just a blur, like they were running through hallways with no idea of where they were or where they were going (mostly because I had no idea where they were or where they were going :$)

     

    Secondly, the transition from the hallways to outside was so sudden I didn't even notice it. This made me feel like there was a few sentences missing and I actually had to backtrack and check I hadn't skipped over anything.

     

    Lastly, while I recognize that not everyone is very good at writing combat, I felt the fight with Knights was not only far too short but not very indicative of the courage and fearlessness Knights of Zakuul are known for. For them to try and flee what seemed like mere seconds into the battle was quite a disconnect for me. It didn't make much sense and, if I'm honest, was a little disappointing. I was looking forward to your portrayal of the fight from Chapter 3, and then it turned out to only be 3 sentences long. :(

     

     

    Other than that, the chapter was an interesting twist on the prime storyline, and I enjoyed much of the interactions between characters as well as your idea to add a few people to the rescue team, without removing Lana and Koth entirely. Personally I would have replaced Koth, but I'm sure you have some purpose in mind for him.

     

    I thought the pacing was great. Nothing felt rushed to me it was a good escape sequence. And in case you haven't been paying attention, Lunafox writes some of the best fight scenes I've ever read and that goes for duels and aerial combat and dogfights. The space battles she has done are nothing short of amazing. I think she just spends time on the fights that matter and have a real impact on the plot. If you felt a disconnect or disappointed that's on you, man. People got different tastes. I thought it was exciting, a real rush. I hate stories where you have to go through paragraphs of boring **** to get to the good stuff. You may not have liked it but I think plenty of us did. My brother doesn't even play the game but comes to the forum just to read these stories.

     

    Sorry to derail the thread but I had to get that out there.

     

    Keep it up Lunafox.

  12. Bravo Luna. You had me laughing and crying and smirking all within the span of about twenty minutes as I was reading this. Liatrix is complicated and she causes complications. I wonder what she's going to do next. Fantastic from start to finish. Like Foxfire said, it just keeps getting better and better. And the part with Jonas arguing with Quinn is gold. Is it next weekend yet?:rak_01:
  13. That was really sad and so so good. I'm amazed that I could care that much about a character I've only just read about. Sweet kid. I wouldn't want to be Arcann now. Scourge is out for blood. I can't wait to see what happens next. :rak_03:
  14. Is it still Charles Boyd and co? I like Charles' enthusiasm but at this point...they could go on AO3 and find excellent fanfic writers who would have less plot holes. In KOTET I understand that it was cut down a lot from the original, but still.

     

    I'm actually feeling like I don't even want to log in anymore. I mean, what's the point of spending time, energy and money getting to know these companions and get attached to them if they're going to be destroyed later?

     

     

    You don't have to go to A03 for excellent writing, you can go to the fanfic forums right here. Look at Lunafox's stories. Any of her stuff is head and shoulders above anything the bioware writers have done. I stay subbed for that as much as anything the devs here do.

     

    I'm going to wait and see what happens but I'm not happy about this. Theron was my bro and my g/f romanced him. She was in tears over this. W2G bioware. :rak_07:

  15. Count me with the squeeeers, I did too. Really glad to see you back to your writing Lunafox. I've been wondering what your take on the newer chapters would be like. You didn't disappoint, so much better than the game. Excellent start and I can't wait to see more. Best of all I got something to read during lunch again. :rak_03:
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