I don't remember any Lelu in my game or Theron flipping the bird. I should have frapsed I guess.

Who pissed in your cornflakes? No need to be such a jerk about it. I don't give a crap about decorating, but I'm going to +1 the OP's and Luna's suggestion. Sounds fine to me.

I can't believe no one has said it yet. Can I have your stuff? Good luck in your next game or whatever.

Hey Luna I can't say it enough you have an impeccable ability with the characters. Everybody sounds like they should. Your Scourge is perfect. Very few writers do him justice. Really really good chapter but then they all are LoL. You've got me really curius about what will happen in the future with so much going on. Kudos on how you keep it all straight in your head. Hurry up write more!!!

It sounds like you haven't read Lunafox's stories. She knows what good story telling is, cause she does it all the time. She should be writing for the game. I have said it before and its worth saying again. Her fics get me through the dryspells in this game and she has an uncanny ability to write the canon characters. I agree the stories should keep us guessing, but that's the problem with the game lately. It's predictable. People were calling it months before the end. There were no surprises.

Nice troll attempt guy, but the OP is right, I agree with them and most of the posters here totally. There needs to be a kill option on Ashara. BW needs to fix this asap.

Good riddance then. Yeah some ranting there sorry, but like I said I just got it done and it angered me and left me feeling like a chump. Good job BW, way to make your subs feel great in a game they pay for. What was the point of building up the INQ as this powerful Sith if they can't even take out their lamest apprentice? They could have had a fight and INQ puts her in her place, but I would rather have killed her. Never liked her anyway.

I just finished playing the return and what a complete piece of garbage. Ashara my INQ's equal? Don't make me laugh. Fire the idiot who wrote this trash. There has to be a kill option. Like most people on the thread said, Ashara is a flakey twirp. She didn't fight all the bads. Ashara is delusional. A real true Sith wouldn't hesitate to kill her.

Hey Luna Mindblowing chapter. Man, Liatrix sure showed them and like the other commenters said the part with Doc and that droid was hilarious. I can't believe my man One is gone. Didn't see that coming. Keep it up Luna. Got a lot questions can't wait until the next post.

Forgot to say I'm going to be busy moving for the next couple weeks. I didn't quit reading, I just won't have net.

Thanks. I can sweeten coffee at 20 paces. Its a gift.

Thanks. No worries at all. Yeah we would get along. Keep the beer flowing and the cigars lit.

S'up Maybe strong in smell but silent is true. Lurker is true too. I lurk there fore I am.

I vote stay too. They're hilarious. I keep inhaling my soda.

Theron is my toon's drinking buddy and best friend. Got to get away from the wife sometime lol. I don't take screenshots much or draw or write but I like the adventures they get into. So good thread.

You really put a lot of thought into everything and it shows. Its a lot richer than what we get in game. I guess it's like comparing a book to a movie, the book is always better. You got a real way with words, every bit is great. Hurry up and write more

Good suggestion. Works for me.

I thought the pacing was great. Nothing felt rushed to me it was a good escape sequence. And in case you haven't been paying attention, Lunafox writes some of the best fight scenes I've ever read and that goes for duels and aerial combat and dogfights. The space battles she has done are nothing short of amazing. I think she just spends time on the fights that matter and have a real impact on the plot. If you felt a disconnect or disappointed that's on you, man. People got different tastes. I thought it was exciting, a real rush. I hate stories where you have to go through paragraphs of boring **** to get to the good stuff. You may not have liked it but I think plenty of us did. My brother doesn't even play the game but comes to the forum just to read these stories. Sorry to derail the thread but I had to get that out there. Keep it up Lunafox.

Bravo Luna. You had me laughing and crying and smirking all within the span of about twenty minutes as I was reading this. Liatrix is complicated and she causes complications. I wonder what she's going to do next. Fantastic from start to finish. Like Foxfire said, it just keeps getting better and better. And the part with Jonas arguing with Quinn is gold. Is it next weekend yet?

Great chapter Luna. My favorite parts were the dating profile line and like Divalicious said the rescue with everything flying around. It was really realistic. Can't wait for more. Lana better watch out. Loved every bit.

That was really sad and so so good. I'm amazed that I could care that much about a character I've only just read about. Sweet kid. I wouldn't want to be Arcann now. Scourge is out for blood. I can't wait to see what happens next.

You don't have to go to A03 for excellent writing, you can go to the fanfic forums right here. Look at Lunafox's stories. Any of her stuff is head and shoulders above anything the bioware writers have done. I stay subbed for that as much as anything the devs here do. I'm going to wait and see what happens but I'm not happy about this. Theron was my bro and my g/f romanced him. She was in tears over this. W2G bioware.

Agree. I've spent millions and no Gamo yet.

Count me with the squeeeers, I did too. Really glad to see you back to your writing Lunafox. I've been wondering what your take on the newer chapters would be like. You didn't disappoint, so much better than the game. Excellent start and I can't wait to see more. Best of all I got something to read during lunch again.

I hope its Jadus.