I appreciate the comments, I guess I should assume that not everyone loves dubstep as I do 8^)
I've obviously watched this vid quite a few times as I edited it, and I definitely noticed some points where I should have been stockstriking but didn't. A little confession, I usually spam hammer shot when I'm trying to get out of my tunnel vision and see what's going on around me, and it usually doesn't hurt since it's nice to stay as close to full ammo as possible. The game can get pretty hectic sometimes. I would recommend to anyone who wants to improve their game to record themselves playing a warzone, and watch it a few times. You'll be surprised what you can learn.
Thanks again for the feedback, I will be adding commentary to my next vid.