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  1. i loved watching them before the game came out but now theyve ust sorta stopped. hope they make more soon!
  2. Chapter 3 - Acceptance and admittance Galak made the first move in the fight, still full of anger at the death of his father. He narrowly missed the sith lords face. The young jedi kept on attacking in anger, trying to defeat his enemy. The sith lord was unfased by his weak attacks, defending himself as if he was blocking blaster shots. When Revan saw his chance he slashed at Galaks' face, strinking him just missing his right eye but still cutting his face. Staggering back and holding his face in sheer agony he gave out a scream of pain. Blood was already covering most of the right side of his face, dripping onto his cothes and staining them dark red. The sith lord was walking slowly towards him and kicked his chest and with a thud he fell to the floor, the sith raised his hand and bolts of lightning crackled from his hands and were forced opon the jedi's body. As he did he could feel a connection to the boy, he could feel his power, as he did he stopped. "Stand, Jedi" commanded Revan Galak climbed to his feet, the last sparks of lightning dying away. "I could feel you pain, your anger, your hate, your strong connection to the force. The dark side sorrounds you." The jedi stood there with no words, just a great hurt and wonder as to why he was being spared, he had been tought that the sith don't hink twice about killing their enemies or even the innocent. "I give you a choice. Come with me to Korriban, and train at the Sith Academy. Or, you can stay here, and persih along with the other jedi." Galak looked down to the ground, closing his eyes. Knowing that the only way he could live was to go with Revan. Before he had a chance to speak Lexii burst in through the door. The sith turned round and started to force choke the girl. "Who is this!? If you are to come with me no-one must know! If any jedi finds that you have turned to the dark side then they will hunt you down until you are defeated" Galak could tell the angry tone in Revan's voice. "Let her go!" he demanded. "Tell me, who, she, is!" Revan tightened his grip on Lexii, who was now gasping for air. "She, she's my best friend" "Why should i let her go?!" "Because, becuase i love her." Galak looked up to Lexii as he admitted his feelings towards her. [iNCOMPLETE] will carry on shortly. blame college not me thanks for reading
  3. Chapter 2 - Red There was a special reason to get up early today, to get to the jedi academy as early as possible. Galak pretty much ran to the academy to meet with Master Tunda, to be assigned his trial to find and retrieve a crystal from one of the caves. "your here early, is it by any chance to get to the caves early?" asked Tunda "you are correct Master Tunda, which cave am i to go to?" "patience young one, all in good time, i wish you to go to the Raxell cave and bring back a crystal for your lightsaber, you must go alone and unarmed, if you encounter trouble then you must use the force to defend yourself. Nobody has been to the Raxell cave for a long time, so we dont know if there is any life in there, so be careful padawan," "yes Master Tunda, i will be careful, thankyou for your guidance," Galak left the temple and started to head towards the cave, he could see his best friend walking along the same path towards him. "Hey Galak" "Hey, sorry Lexii i'm in a bit of a rush. I get to choose my crystal today." "That's great! I'l talk to you later yeah? Master Tunda has got me organising holocrons again. Ah well soemone's got to do it, see you later" As Lexii carried on walking towards the temple, he thought how unfair it was that jedi were incouraged not to love. He had felt so strongly about her ever since they met but yet he could never tell her as the jedi council would not allow them to express their emotions, as this was not the jedi way. Moving thiese thoughts aside he continued towards Raxell cave in search of his own crystal. When he reached the cave and could immediatly sense a great power inside, but this power was not off the light side but of the dark. He chose to ignore it and enter the cave anyway despite the presence. He was traveling deeper and deeper into the cave, following his connection of the force hoping to find a crystal. It seemed like he had been walking for hours, but he finaly found sc******s of crystals, blue, green, orange which other padawans had discovered. This was a clue that he was close to a part of the cave which harboured the precious gems. After a time of following his instincts he came to a part of the cave, in which he could sense the dark side even more than before, he continued into a small section of the cave. Inside was red crystals, the dark side had been in the cave before, Galak could sense it, a powerful sith had been here before him, but there was no trace of any jedi being in this place. His eyes were drawn to a sharp looking crystal sticking out of the wall, it was emmiting a blood red glow around its surface, he took it out of the wall and felt a strong conection with the crystal. Placing the crystal into his satchel, he continued looking for the desired crystal that would be for a jedi, his search brought him to another place with ocean blue, he took the closet one to him and rushed out of the cave to get away from the dark presence of the red crystals. He then returned to the jedi academy, with the red stone safely hidden in his satchel, the blue in his hand. Master Tunda instructed him to construct his lightsaber in the training room, as he did so his mind was searching for an answer of what to do with the red stone. He decided to keep it and so carried on with his construction. Blue crystal in place he held the lightsaber above his head and ignited the blade, a low humming could be heard and a strong blue light seen. He admired his handywork until he was interupted by his Master. "Ah good, well done. As you have now completed your lightsaber i can now say that you have officially completed the trial and earned the rank of jedi. Congratulations Galak," "Thankyou Master, i would not have done it if had not been for your teaching, now i must return home and show my father," ",Yes of course, very well, be on your way" Galak Darkmoon left the room, now a jedi and protector of the light. He rushed home to show his father, but as he got closer to the village he could see burning flames and rising smoke. Running to his village hoping that everythings was ok, there was nothing ok now about the village that he had grown up in, the empire had found Ilum, and sent shock troopers and many sith to conquer the planet. Avoiding detection from the imperial troops he snuck home, only to find a sith striking down his father dead. At that moment the hate built up inside him and he lit his saber and lashed out at the sith warrior, using all his hate and anger and in revenge of his fathers death,killing the sith in one strike.At that moment something changed deep inside him, he had used his anger to kill the sith, yet it felt good. He had felt the dark sides influence and used it to his advantage. That decision would change his life forever. He went over to his father, fearing the worst, he held him in his arms as the last few essences of life left his body. "inside that cave was a dark presence, it still sorrounds you know, i know the source, its...." he had no time to mourn his death as another sith had entered the hut, but there was something different about this sith, he hid his face behind a mask and was not phased by the boy, lightsaber in hand. This sith was Darth Revan. He was Lord of the Sith, a powerul dark jedi feared throught the galaxy. The sith lord rose his lightsaber above his head, Galak did the same, he was about to prepare to face the sith in combat.
  4. PLEASE READ - story is incomplete as writing is put on hold due to college work i have to complete. will post again when i continue writing, thanks and this is my first star wars fan fic/story so apologies if it isn't up to normal standard :L thanks for reading Chapter 1 Galak Darkmoon was on his way back from the jedi academy, it wasnt far from his home but still he had to walk past the caves. He could see the latest lot of jedi padawans going into the nearest cave to him. He had often seen them returning to the camp without a crystal, just proving that it wasnt easy and took time. He was determined that when he was old enough he would find one on the first trip. He carryed on walking past the caves and continued on his way home, where his father was waiting for him. His dad was a jedi knight who had been seriously injured in the madalorian wars, and so took rest on Ilum, helping to train younglings at the academy. Galaks mother had passed away 2 years ago when he was 16, he'd never been the same since that day, the fear of losing his mother had fueled his anger and hate. Jedi Master Tunda, the elder of the academy and the village, had sensed this inside him and warned him that giving into his fear, and emotions would take him towards the dark side of the force. At the time Galak had dismissed his trainers warning but later came to realise that the dark side would only lead to suffering. He arrived home to find his father was speaking with Master Tunda. "Ah Galak, good to see you, i was just speaking with your father about you going to the caves to find your own lightsaber crystal," informed Master Tunda. "Are you serious master?! thankyou, i believe i am ready for the trial," "Then it is settled, you shall be at the academy early tomorrow morning and i shall asign you your trial, i shall see you then" as he said this Tunda got out of his seat and headed for the door, and with that went back to the academy. "Well done my son! congratulations, i hope your trial goes well," exclaimed his father, "right its getting late and you best head off to bed, big day tomorrow," "yeah, i suppose your right, night dad" As he lay there that night, so many things were going through Galaks' mind, such things as; what colour crystal will i get? Will there be any creatures in the cave i am given? and possibly most importantly, will i survive? After much tossing and turning in bed he finally got to sleep. A common experience for force weilders was to have visions instead of dreams, and the one that was currently seaming through Galaks' mind was one, although he was unaware, was one about his future. And the things he saw that night were to be scarred in his mind for his life. There was pain, fear, anger and suffering. Images of his mothers death, his emotions stronger than ever. Whispering voices telling him dark secrets and the power that could be his if he only accepted who he really was! He woke with a start and remembered that this was the day he got his crystal, the day his training would be complete.
  5. i started writing a short story on a sight called booksie, there is not much audience for star wars fan fics on the site so i thought id post it on here. the link to the book is http://www.booksie.com/science_fiction/short_story/rose_thornton/light-to-dark it is free to read and to sign up also if you wish to try yourself, thanks
  6. hey all being as i have alot of free time atm iv got into making youtube videos and have got star wars, doctor who and couple of random videos on my channel. would be great if people woul check them out, links below for the star wars videos swtor cinematic music video http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pwp2x5yXROk&feature=plcp hyperspace hoopla clips http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ASr0fqDHAj8&feature=plcp http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WJe7n6ci01M&feature=plcp http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nkoB9ZNDA04&feature=plcp swtfu music videos http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P0Ho_JOWf_o&feature=plcp http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dd1CdKV5bN0&feature=plcp http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AY3GeE0nNqs&feature=plcp i know thats alot of links but why not check them out when ur next on youtube if u got any comments feel free to leave them below thanks
  7. thanks for the reply! no reason for them to be taken down tho its stupid i loved doing polls lol
  8. exactly what the title says. we used to be able to post polls on our threads but dosnt seem like we are able to do that anymore. it was useful because some people dont like to reply to a thread and a poll was a good alternative. plus im sure youv seen the 'who was better revan or vader' style posts. they used to have polls so you could easily see which was most popular so, does anyone know if im just being a bit thick and cant see how to do it or if they are well and truly gone? thanks
  9. my main is called Galak. i really wanted the legacy name Darkmoon but came to choosin and it had been taken so i chose Daktro. i now have Galak Daktro (sith warrior) Obarech Daktro (bounty hunter) Kovad Daktro (sith inquisitor) also have a full background story for my legacy and all its characters lol i have to much free time
  10. looking through the forums and so many people complaining about swtor and 1.2 patch and hardly a possitive thread among them. so i would like to say the main reason why i like swtor. i like it because i can be anything i want to be. if life isnt going well (which it often dosnt for some people) playing the game lets me get away from it all and focus on something else. and you meet some great people whilst playing who make the experience even better. feel free to comment etc but this is just my opinion
  11. thats y i thought, before bioware add anything in why not get some players whod be willing to run a smaller version. just while we wait for bioware to do something
  12. I was talking with a friend and how in the films there was pod racing. and then afterwards a couple of games podracing related. And then in KOTOR1 there was a challenge where you had to get a ceertain time against the black vulkars. so its cropped up in many games (and the films) so, we were wondering with permission from the game big cheeses etc would we be allowed to hold races? if we could find trackes on different planets, charge and entry fee of say 250 credits and then winner takes all. we would have the same level speeders against eachother. so we could have rank 1, rank 2 and then rank 3 races. Lots of lvl 50 players have complained of not having anything to do. This would just be a break from the class quests and missions and it could also possibly get more people to stay online if races were always a certain day and time. (it would likely be on the EU server the projenitor as that is the server we are on) but if more people created races on there own servers it could become big. please can players reply to the other thread http://www.swtor.com/community/showthread.php?p=3696492#post3696492 and if any boiware employees read this can you reply on this thread please. thanks
  13. Speeder Racing! Hello once again to the weekly speeder races! Todays race is taking place on Tatooie, the home of speeder racing! Up for grabs today is 2.5k prize money! All these racers fancy there chances so lets get this weeks speederracing underway! Racers you will go on 1. 3...2...1. and there off! first one to complete the track and back here is the winner of todays credits! Hiya guys bascially me and a friend were talking yesterday while on tatooie and we wondered if we could do speeder racing. so here we are giving tor gamers a chance to let us know what they think of the idea. any feedback would be much appreciated We have also posted a permission thread on the customerservice forum hoping to get a reply from a bioware employee saying if we would be allowed to do it. im sure we would as its no loss to them if anything it could keep people playing more during race days (which would be the same every week unless said)
  14. i think its these ones (they are up in a box somewhere safe and sound in loft so cant quite remember) http://www.google.co.uk/imgres?q=70%27s+star+wars+comics&hl=en&biw=1366&bih=643&gbv=2&tbm=isch&tbnid=edIrUX5VlQ642M:&imgrefurl=http://space1970.blogspot.com/2010/01/at-last-beyond-movie-beyond-galaxy.html&docid=fTARBLEW__kj2M&imgurl=http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-kymRLkbN8YU/TrDW6lislsI/AAAAAAAAE2k/l7AnmARH***/s1600/StarWars07.jpg&w=400&h=619&ei=o0hRT-bTDOqq0QWDju3wCw&zoom=1 and i think thats issue 2 aswell the one ive got because the cover rings a bell
  15. i have the first ever series of star wars comics (think they were the 70's or 80's all i know is they were the firs tever ones) and i was wondering how much i could sell them for? ive done bit of search but not found anything on what collectors would pay i have 4 i think and then some later oens but its the originals im interested in. i dont have issue 1 but i do have 2, 5, 10 and 12 i think it is. but defonitly 2 and 5 and one even has the stickers it came with (2/3 of them anyway) they are all in mint condition. does anyone have any idea what they could be worth? thanks
  16. yeh ive had few random convos but ive always started them. you find the odd few people who will have convos and banter with you for ages until they have to log. like couple weeks ago i was bantering and having a laugh on taris for like 2 hours with people ive never met before. and yeh guilds some do chat some dont depends in numbers realy
  17. ive seen on quite a few occasions on different planets as both republic and empire that nobody talks much. ok so sometimes ur in a flashpoint or midfight etc but some of the convos ive had were great (i wont say what they were as idk the age of ppl reading this) when tor first started quite a few ppl were talking but now not so much anyone else noticed this?
  18. for people who were saying things bout me not going on for ages. i went on today so screw you
  19. oh yeh defo a baby me. so sorry i couldnt realise that asking a question is being a baby
  20. i havnt been on tor in 2 weeks and im not botherd as im slowly losing interest in it :\ anyone else like this or is it just me?
  21. i searched for a video and ppl were saying she was hot etc. im a girl myself so cant comment
  22. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nkoB9ZNDA04 wonderd what ahsoka would look like in real life. so heres a video of ahsoka tano (of clone wars) at star wars weekend
  23. have uploaded 3 videos onto youtube of the hyperspace hoopla at the star wars weekend. even if u dont know what hyperspace hoopla is the videos are good to watch anyway. ahsoka video http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nkoB9ZNDA04 vader and padme video http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ASr0fqDHAj8 stormtroopers and boba fett video http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WJe7n6ci01M
  24. im just gonna put it out there. starkiller beat vader pretty much. and almost did it a 2nd time. and i never liked luke if im being honest
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