Hunterkat Posted May 28, 2017 Share Posted May 28, 2017 (edited) On Belsavis the mission anarchy has some major flaws in the story. You go to meet your Jedi contact and find her dead in a building. the guy with her, Pak something, says that she crawled back half dead and told him her whole story before she died. He said he tried to help her but, in his words, he's not a med tech. Ok, that is somewhat reasonable except the fact of where they are!! they are in a secured area surrounded by guards with a medical droid not more than 15m outside the door! He couldn't poke his head out and say "Hey, I need some help here!" That's beside the point that she had to crawl right past that medical droid to get to him! I think this meeting place needs to be moved somewhere more remote. Edited May 28, 2017 by Hunterkat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteveTheCynic Posted May 28, 2017 Share Posted May 28, 2017 Yeah, it's a bit silly. I'd recommend moving the first sentence (that starts "On Belsavis") outside the spoiler block so we have some idea of what you're going to talk about before opeing the spoiler box. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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