NobleSpec Posted July 2, 2013 Share Posted July 2, 2013 (edited) Hey guys, I wanted to share some neat stuff with you all. The following is a Roleplaying Story-arch that was thought up and created by The Crimson Order on the BC server...Few things here, we set a basic plot story, allowing everyone to get into the character they wanted, then we set out on a 4 chaptered story experience that turned out beyond awesome...It was fun, it was exciting, and it was interesting...This is the first story Arch the Crimson Order attempted, and will continue to do many more due to its success- Each chapter was a separate event, each chapter was on a sunday weekly, ex: Chapter 1-May 17th...Chapter 2- May 24th and so on for 4 chapters....So! Here it is! This is exactly how it turned out, start to finish. This idea could be used by other RP guilds Story-Arch: " The Artifact" Prologue- 100 years before SWTOR timeline....lived a grey Jedi, his name was Saikou. This grey jedi had fought in many conflicts, but after those conflicts, the grey jedi moved to a quiet world to raise a family and to meditate. However, disaster struck, as a plague reached all over the sparsely populated planet. The grey jedi used all of his power to protect his family..but it was too much to handle for the old jedi...in a last desperate move, the grey jedi used all of his force to create a artifact out of an old data cube he had in his household...using fluid from plants around him to create a sustaining force powered object. He used this object through the force to create a force-shield around him and his family, allowing the family to wait out the plague as it died in time...But however the artifact seemed to boost the living force within each of the family members body, allowing them to survive their bodies decay longer than the average living being...which added many years to their lives...However 20 years after the plague hit, a young smuggler named Lanorn scanned the unpopulated planet for any profitable finds to give him fast credits. He learned of the Jedi family's homestead, he landed and scouted the house out while the Jedi was away looking for plants. The smuggler found the artifact, and decided it would be a great pay-off, he grabbed it and left the planet quickly. When the Jedi returned he noticed the Artifacts disappearance, but decided it was time to move on in his life without it...to let the force take its cycle....The smuggler warped back into the core worlds region...but on his way to Ord Mantell, he had a major malfunction with his ship, and his crash landed on Tython, the jedi homeworld. As the smuggler escaped the wreckage, he could not find the artifact anywhere, not even on the ship...he figured it fell out during his crash, so he left, and snuck off world............As we look closer, we find that the artifact is buried in the dirt of Tython never to be touched....Until...100 years later later... Chapter 1- " The Tide of Darkness" (100 years after the Prologue) It was a normal day for The Crimson Order ( A separate order allied with the Jedi, but founded by Revan before he left for the Dark callings)... Until Cratoren Arcadia, who is the Jedi Knight that leads the Order's most valiant and brave soldiers, receives a call from the Jedi council on Tython. The Crimson Order assembles its best jedi, Including Cratoren, a young male Cathar named Odirez, and a bright, strong young woman named Reeseomari. The Crimson Order elite squad "Reaper Squad" led by Commander Avens provided military support as well. This group of heroes made their way to Tython, and were informed that the Council sensed a dark presence deep into Tython, the group is tasked with finding the source, and bringing it to the Council for study and to be disposed of. The group sets out into the grass fields and hills, searching...The dark calling however grows stronger, as the three jedi sense it, they believe they are getting closer. Reaper Squad's SGT. Jeorge receives a signal coming from a flesh raider camp, the group decides to split into two groups, Reaper goes into the enemy camp, while the three Jedi press on to find the source. Reaper Squad fights through the Flesh Raider camp, and they find a datapad...covered in a thick black ooze...The squad sets out of the camp to rendezvous with the three jedi, but as they are about to comm the jedi, they are ambushed by a group of flesh raiders, while fighting them off, Commander Avens is killed as a flesh raider stabs him in the back. The Squad is saved by a young jedi on her trials named Aura, as they kill the last flesh raider. They notice now that Avens had died, and the datapad was in his pouch, but the black ooze from the datapad begins to slither on the corpse... Sgt. Jeorge who now takes command of the squad grabs the datapad, and they set out to find the three jedi, who had ventured into the cave that led to the Forge... However, when the all of this was happening to Reaper Squad, The three jedi knights Cratoren, Odirez and Reese ventured deep into the cave connecting the Flesh Raider territory with the ancient jedi ruins called The Forge. They started feeling the darkness call to them...with this connection they used it to get and idea to where the artifact was...But Cratoren started fighting the calling..fearing it would consume him, and it clouded his mind as he fought it off....Odirez however...had started acting..strange, saying things to convince Cratoren to not fight the calling, to use it, to use it to gain more power. Reese helped Cratoren to recover his minds strength, as it recovered, they finally made it to the Forge, and contacted Reaper Squad to meet them at a place they cleared out.. When the two groups met, they decided to continue on, to finish the mission. Odirez demanded Jeorge give him the datapad, so the confused SGT. did. Reaper Squad began to push the flesh raiders back to give the jedi room to search for the source around the forge....But, Reese discovers a ancient dungeon that plummets deep underground, beneath the fighting... The three jedi submerge into the depths...and here is where the dark calling is the strongest...It affects the mind of Cratoren again, Odirez however, sense the artifact nearby and runs to it, leaving the two jedi behind...Reese once again uses her power to clear Cratorens mind....Cratoren..realizing now what has happened, and what was happening in front of him, rushes after Odirez. Reese Calls for Reaper squads backup as they track down Odirez in the dungeon...Cratoren reaches Odirez, but when he finds him he sees Odirez holding a square datacube...That had bonded with the dark side of the force..after being in decay for so long...it had become corrupted and was oozing out dark ooze...like the datapad was...its infected Odirez's mind....and turned the young Cathar Knight...to the dark side... Cratoren demanded Odirez give him the artifact...but Odirez wields his lightsaber and screams and shouts quotes of power, he tells Cratoren he wishes to embark the will of his ideals on the galaxy...Cratoren ignites his white lightsaber, demanding once again....In an act of hope Cratoren puts his weapon away, and walks slowly to Odirez trying to calm him down, but just as he reaches for Odirez, the corrupted Jedi slashes Cratoren in the chest! and rushes away, SGT. Jeorge also trys to stop him, but is fatally wounded by Odirez's lightsaber as well. The group races after Odirez, but he escapes.. As Cratoren and Jeorge lay on the ground fatally wounded....But, Jeorge slides a medpac to the jedi knight...Cratoren uses it, and uses every ounce of his force powers to heal what he can in Jeorges wound...He carries the wounded Soldier to the temple, where the rest of the group meets them....Cratoren reports to the council and then gives a speech to the beaten and battered group...but as he speaks, Jeorge falls to the floor with the black ooze flowing from his wound... END CHAPTER 1// So that was just the first chapter, it took about 2 1/2 hours to complete, being it was so long to explain, ill let yall see how you like it, if you want to see the rest of the story including CHP 2, CHP 3, AND CHP 4 please say so in the comments! Let me know if you wish for it to continue! If not it is fine! Also leave comments for feedback, questions on how we did the rp, or questions for the story! Thanks For Reading! 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