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Romance of Palpatine


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Trying to work on a fanfic here. None of his concubines are interesting, nor do I think Palpatine got any feeling other than physical relationship. Will Daala raise his interest? Since she could be Tarkin's lover to raise, sleep with the Emperor won't be a problem. Edited by Slowpokeking
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He actually did have romantic relationships. Real or fake it did not matter. Whether he used them for his own purposes or if actually had feelings of love for them did not matter. The only thing that mattered to him was gaining more power.

 

But he did have relationships. Weird as it may seem.

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Trying to work on a fanfic here. None of his concubines are interesting, nor do I think Palpatine got any feeling other than physical relationship. Will Daala raise his interest? Since she could be Tarkin's lover to raise, sleep with the Emperor won't be a problem.

 

One word. Kreia.

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Trying to work on a fanfic here. None of his concubines are interesting, nor do I think Palpatine got any feeling other than physical relationship. Will Daala raise his interest? Since she could be Tarkin's lover to raise, sleep with the Emperor won't be a problem.

 

Palpatine probably did love someone very deeply at one time, but never had any examples around him to ever learn how to actually love someone properly. Now if you're going to write something cool, judging by how you put your words together above, it doesn't really stir up any confidence in the reader. You gotta always be writing the story, even when you're not writing. That's how you will build your reader base. Writing for a writer is a serious thing, here it looks like you're having problems with English. Maybe you rushed or were typing off of a phone. But if you're going to do it, do it right. If English is difficult first do it in your native language. Translating it back into English will greatly improve your writing skills in English.

 

A good twist might be a dark seduction of Mara Jade. Good luck! :csw_speeder:

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Maybe he is gay, JK.

 

If i had to write a story about a love interest though, it would probally be put in around the time he meets Plageuis.

 

In fact it would play out like this:

 

Palpatine loves a girl that he has known since childhood.

 

Plagueis; palpatines new master, discovers this love interest and hires an assassin to kill her.

 

Palpatine thwarts the assassin and it led to believe the assassin was hired by the banking clan.

 

Palpatine discovers the truth, that his master is behind the attempt.

 

Palpatine realizes that the girl will never be safe and kills her himself.

 

Plagueis is beat at his own game and realized then that palpatine was the correct choice for apprentice and that palpatine will not hesitate to kill plagueis when the time comes,

 

Plaguies aware and respectful of the rule of two, feels his time is near when he discovers palpatine has been training darth maul.

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